Hunter Black Page 27 - Excellent Bargaining Position

I really am pleasantly surprised by the effectiveness of this scene. We're giving the reader lots of exposition -- some important, some not -- but we're giving it to them through conflict. Hunter's struggles with Iosephus and Babydoll, coupled with Iosephus' gloating, make the whole thing feel relatively natural.

Will looks back at this work with disdain, but we were firing on all cylinders. We were excited and we were into it and it shows.