Hunter Black Page 36 - Black Ribbon, We Meet

This was our first George Lucas page.

Will ended up diverging from the action I'd laid out -- and our initial page was lettered in such a way as to reflect the older script and older intent. When we rebuilt our site and worked on going to print, we tweaked this page so that the dialogue worked better with what was on the page.

I guess the lesson here is that your work's not done until you decide it is, publication be damned.