Hunter Black Page 28 - Spit-Take

Maybe the wheels of this scene, that has felt so well done thus far, are starting to get a little wobbly. Not that we've done anything wrong, per se -- I just think that all of it going on too long. Maybe it doesn't feel that way when it's read as a single scene instead of as a collection of contiguous individual pages. I sometimes forget that, for all intents and purposes, we're really only posting half a page at a time.

Anyway, there's a lesson to learned here about starting a scene as late as possible...and then ending it equally early.