Hunter Black Page 17 - The Black Ribbon. Damn.

What I Said Then: "The Gennesine River crosses the main continent of our setting; it is also known as the Black Ribbon, due to its meandering path and its dark waters. These names are also used by our thief, because the river is a massive smuggling thoroughfare; more illegal money goes through the Black Ribbon than anywhere else. Gennesine the thief leaves a piece of black ribbon in places that she has robbed…usually."

See? The commentary I wrote back when we first published this page proved that our world-building wasn't all just me winging it. I knew who the Black Ribbon was, I knew things about her. I knew that the seat of the Church was the Palace of Pearl in Weyland's Bay.

You know, I got lucky with this page, lucky in my choice of collaborators. This is A LOT of dialogue, probably more than I should've had. Will and Jacob did an excellent of making it work. Overwriting is a problem I have to this day.